He was an oasis
in the palm of her hand
What tears she tasted
testing for truth
Were just desserts
wet & wild
Acid dates from bitter rain

4 Comments

  1. Pi ("π") on 6th May, 2017 at 5:03 am

    Such a great contrast~ very well written.

    • denise0904 on 6th May, 2017 at 6:32 am

      Thank you Pi, very kind. praise from you is taken to mean high standard.

      • Pi ("π") on 8th May, 2017 at 8:11 am

        Denise, it’s not just about that – I know you write beautifully. You were and always be a very special someone ~ someday, I hope you can accept me back. I miss you and I truly mean it.

        • denise0904 on 8th May, 2017 at 12:17 pm

          pi atm i’m just tired. okay .later

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