First Tanka
Ancients tell stories
of walkabout wilderness
Spirits come to him
who steps into the dream time
and boy transitions to man
Ancients tell stories
of walkabout wilderness
Spirits come to him
who steps into the dream time
and boy transitions to man
It’s amazing!!!! Wonderful!!!! I adore it!!! I’m so happy you wrote one!!!
come now, it is my first one. You not being much help flattering me so. If you are right and it is good then how do I overcome this. It feels like stage fright
You have already proven yourself over and over on Twitter. You must believe in your poetry. Feel strongly about it. You’re excellent at what you do. Your style speaks of who you are. Have no fear. Write! What I suggest is simple. Keep doing what you’re doing. Go to Prose. Write there. People will embrace your work. I am a fan, for sure! I believe in you. Now you need to believe in you. The magic is there … let it shine!
okayyy.. at least you have me smiling. thank you
I love the way you write visual and stunning
I am blown away… I’ve just started this blog and nervous. So thank you for the support. Means so much
especially at this early stage.