The comparison

!8 #NaPoWriMo

My heart bloomed in spring
Yesterday when we were green
I hid myself behind my skirts
As the sun made a halo of my hair
Ye shook my nerve, thy hand upon me
Where lines of shadows danced
In truth beyond the ringing of the bells
I knew not what to think,  but love.

Written as a response to 2nd Verso of Henry Lawson’s
“Do you think that I do not know”WIN_20180418_17_51_54_Pro (3)

4 Comments

  1. Sadah on 18th April, 2018 at 6:22 pm

    Nice piece.

    • Denise Carruthers on 18th April, 2018 at 6:27 pm

      thank you very much, wonderful of you to tell me

      • Sadah on 18th April, 2018 at 6:28 pm

        Would you like to share your content on our open publishing platform?

  2. Denise Carruthers on 18th April, 2018 at 7:48 pm

    How do I do that?

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